Hi my name is Brenden and here are my poems.
Adding Integers
adding integers is very easy to do
all you have to do is listen
Subtracting Integers
First you have to change and then you have to ad
this way you wont be so mad.
Multiplying Integers
2 times 2 is 4
if you get this right opportunity will be at the door
Ron's Rule
Ron's rule says that if I have odd amounts of negative integers I will have negative integers if I
multiply them. I think that rule is the creme de la creme.
Dividing integers
2 divide by 2 is 1
if you did this right you are as bright as the sun
Partitive Division
Megan has 5 bags of cookies
that look like wookies
all together she has 15
and all the people think she is the math queen.
Quotative Division
Quotative divison is how many 2s in 6
the way you can show this is with sticks!
PART 2
Hello son! Whats going on?
Im just going to my band practice.
That sounds like fun. But first your going to have to tell me something.Whats that?
Can you tell me what N means?
It's a number value.
Good job son! Your very bright!
Thanks dad.
Can you solve N plus 4?
No i can't because you didn't give me the sum of the question.
Im glad you caught that. The sum is 14.
ok then N would be 10.
Great job!
How did you get that answer?
First i needed the sum.
Then I figured out what went into 4 to make 14.
Wow thats great!
Now can you tell me what N plus N multiplied by 6 is?
Can i have the sum please?
Its.....54.
Ok....5 plus 4 equals 9 so then.....6 times 9 is......54!!
Wow son thats very good.
Oh i think the band is here.
Bye dad!
Bye son! Good luck!
Chapter 4
Good job with your poems! Ron's Rule, Adding, and Subtracting were explained well, but could be done a little bit better. But that's okay. Just try harder on your chapter 2. (I'm sorry if I sound mean) I think you are forgetting Partitive and Quotative Poems. But it was still very well done, I'm glad that you posted what you had. Because the mark you are getting for this is better than the mark you would get if you didn't post this! Good job Brenden!
Now for the errors:
- capilization. Remember to put capitials at the beginning of sentences. (After periods)
- Periods.
And that's pretty much it. :) Good job tho, it's good that you got it done and posted it! Keeep it up please! :) :) Oh and the spaces, yea you know what to do. :)
December 9, 2008 at 9:04 PM
Hey Brenden,
You're poems are great. Just try and check on your grammar, and add in those Partitive and Quotative Division Poems!
December 16, 2008 at 10:33 PM
HEEY , Good job. Nice poems , just i think they need to be longer than one sentence.. well the first 3 are. Wheres partitive and quotative division? :0 BAD. Lol. Your movie script is good. Well it kind of makes no sense. Well it probably does, but i cant see that. SORRY , Im being mean. Well I'll stop being mean. (: GOOD JOB!
December 18, 2008 at 9:04 PM
Ok im the only guy who put a comment on this so this won't be long like the others good job a few errors but they said them all
February 11, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Well everyone else pretty much said it, but you did a good job, and just a few errors =P
February 11, 2009 at 6:54 PM
Brenden! I'm so sorry for commenting again! I didn't realize that I commented on yours already. So, I apologize for doing this again! Great poems, they were fun to read! I like how they all rhyme too! Haha. Anyways, so like what I said before, just check your capilization, periods and the spaces. And the poems you missed! Better add them before Hanbit marks yours! :p
February 11, 2009 at 7:07 PM
BRENDEN! Where is chapter 3?! Goodness gee, and um, great job on getting your work done on time! :D
February 11, 2009 at 8:25 PM