tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3739206304628970269.post6671389064610482562..comments2023-04-02T07:56:42.603-05:00Comments on Math Blog 841 (2008): Casey's Interger storyMr. Hhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07206909417000533833noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3739206304628970269.post-43915443072853572972008-11-03T20:43:00.001-06:002008-11-03T20:43:00.001-06:00Casey You are lucky to have SAYyouKNOW leave you a...Casey You are lucky to have SAYyouKNOW leave you a comment behind. She has left many valuable tips about improving your story.Mr. Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07206909417000533833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3739206304628970269.post-14314613908805565102008-11-03T20:43:00.000-06:002008-11-03T20:43:00.000-06:00The quotations you put, 'A little man popped out a...The quotations you put, 'A little man popped out a said "if you answer the following question you will have food supply for a week".'<BR/>- Put a comma after 'said' and 'question'<BR/>- You should capitalize 'if' because it's the beginning of the sentence.<BR/>- The period should be inside the quotation marks<BR/>- It should be, 'A little man popped out and said, "If you answer the following question, you will have food supply for a week."'<BR/><BR/>'"What is (+20)+(-17)"?'<BR/>- The question mark should be inside quotation marks.<BR/>- '"What is (+20)+(-17)?"'.<BR/><BR/><BR/>You should check your grammar, 'A little man popped out a said,'<BR/>- It should be 'A little man popped out and said,'.<BR/><BR/><BR/>'now I will give you a harder one". "What is (+20)+(-17)"?'<BR/>- Capitalize the beginning of your sentence.<BR/>- It should be, 'Now I will give you a harder one, "What is (+20)+(-17)?"'.<BR/><BR/><BR/>'There was a list that had 3 Boxes waiting to be checked off.'<BR/>- 'Boxes' shouldn't be capitalized.<BR/>- It should be 'There was a list that had 3 boxes waiting to be checked off.'<BR/><BR/><BR/>'In his class he became one of the smartest people because just in case another box appeared he would know the answer.'<BR/>- 'in case' is one word, 'incase'.<BR/><BR/><BR/>'He now knew that he was sleeping. He was trying to remember really hard. He now knew how to use integer tiles.'<BR/>- Try not to repeat 'He now knew'.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Make sure to check your grammar, spelling, and the quotations when someone is speaking. Try adding more detail and information. Also try adding pictures, it will show a lot more to your story.sayyouknow 8-41https://www.blogger.com/profile/03443684452216403372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3739206304628970269.post-86037670298423655152008-11-03T20:40:00.000-06:002008-11-03T20:40:00.000-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.sayyouknow 8-41https://www.blogger.com/profile/03443684452216403372noreply@blogger.com